The Magic Relam......The dark ages......
( Queen raine, with sarosia in her arms, and her husband, King Townswend are sitting at their throne, quietly, at the council meeting)
King Townswend: The Magic Relam is crumbling apart. The dark side is finally clouded over our existense. War is upon us.
Queen Raine(whispering to King townswend, worried): It's not safe. It's not safe at all.
King Townswend: My dearest queen, we must wipe out the demons and fight for our freedom.
Queen Raine: But what will that teach Sarosia. We must gain love and peace in the world for the sake of our child.
King Townswend(Regretfully): I'm sorry my dear Raine. We must save our kingdom from Kram. What's done is done.
Mysterious Voice: Maybe I can help
(A hooded figure emerges. It stands still for a moment. Then the person drops the hooded cloak, revealing......A female being with green skin and ocean-blue hair with glowing red eyes that looks menacing)
Queen Raine(Scared Whisper): You
King Townswend: Your presence cannot set foot here
Mysterious Creature: Your power is to useless to keep me from your kingdom
(King Townswend arises from his throne)
King Townswend(Angry): What makes you so certain!
Mysterious Creature(Evil Stare): I'll show you
(The being transforms into an enourmous, frecious dragon that fire-breaths through the council almost striking the king and queen, still holding baby Sarosia in her arms.
The king and queen, along with a few others, race out of the castle and into the woods. They finally reach into an undisclosed location: A tall tower.
They go up the stairs where they see a light and quickly go up to it.......
A fourtune teller sits at her table, gazing over the crystal ball.
Her name is Marazza.)
Queen Raine: Marazza, There is danger ahead of us. We must seek our fate.
Marazza(looks into the crystal ball): I.....I see.......Hope for us.
King Townswend: What will become of this kingdom?
Marazza: The Mystical Tides will protect you from all that is evil.
Queen Raine: What are the Mystical Tides?
Marazza: Powerful Soceresses who gain nobility, intelligence, and strength. They will certainly stop the dark from taking over the kingdom.
King Townswend: Where will we see them?
Marazza: Oh no.......They're not even born yet
(The Dark warriors invades outside of the kingdom)
(The king and queen look from the window and watch in horror)
King Townswend: Marazza, you must take Sarosia to the mortal world where it is safe. We have to sheild her away from this madness.
Marazza(holding baby Sarosia): I'll do as am told, my king.
Queen Raine: What are we going to do?
King Townswend: We must face this
(Marazza runs into the woods with baby Sarosia in her arms and disapears into the darkness)
(The king and queen face before lord kram, a chisled handsome man with dark eyes and wears black medival wear. he is downright evil.)
Lord Sultan: We have what we came for.
(Close up on Lord Kram holding a Clear Crystal necklace)
Queen Raine: You Monster! That will destroy the whole kingdom!
Lord Sultan: That's what I had in mind.
Green-Skinned Being: Soon the magic relam will be ours.
King Townswend: Not if we can stop it.
(The king and the queen hold hands, producing a bright glow. Lord Sultan raises his hand when a burst of green energy source flames his hand. The green-skinned woman's eyes glows bright red. The king and queen's energy source clashes with Lord Sultan's energy source)
(all of the magic relam is dark black)
(A nice, young couple are preparing for christmas eve. The wife is a lovely blond woman with light blue eyes. The husband is a rather handsome man with brown hair and blue eyes. They are both decked out in formalwear. They have a little girl, happily playing with her doll in the corner. She has long, curly, blond hair and has the eyes of her mother.)
(The family all gather up together happily. The scenery is set up in a dreamy state)
(all of a sudden, a shadowy figure burst into the door. The little girl runs into corner and watches in horror as her parents are attacked by the shadowy figure. She is clutching her doll real tightly. The dark figure pulls out a sword and lunges at them while the little is shaking with terror. Blood is splattered on her face. The dark figure walks toward the scared child but another dark figure stops him)
Dark Figure#2: No, let her go.
(The two dark figures leave out door. The little girl hovers in the corner, weeping.
The Summer's house.
(A girl suddenly wakes up from a nightmare)
(KRISTEN, a beautiful, blond girl with light blue eyes but is very hauntingly pale, coming from the scare of her dream. She highly resembles the girl from her dream and is very shaken by the nightmare.)
Woman's Voice: Kristen! Breakfast is ready!
(AUNT MARTHA, an attractive 40ish woman with light auburn hair and AUNT CLAUDIA, an attractive woman in her late 30's with brownish-blondish hair are sitting in the kitchen with KRISTEN, wearing a black hoddie and torn-denim pants, who is slowly eating food with thoughts running through her head)
Aunt Martha: I heard you screaming
Kristen: I was just having those dreams again, Aunt Martha.
Aunt Xena: You've been having the same dreams since last week.
Kristen: How did you know that?
(AUNT CLAUDIA dosen't say anything and seems a little embarassed)
Aunt Martha: We can hear talking in your sleep.
Kristen(Confused): I didn't know that
Aunt Martha: Maybe it's something you like to tell us. Is everything fine, sweetheart?
Kristen: Yes, of course.....it's just that.....I feel like something is preventing me from being happy....having a satisfied life.
Aunt Martha: Honey, you might not be the only one that feels that way.
Kristen: I just feel so abnormal.
Aunt Claudia: Well, that could be a good thing. Which means you're special. I was never that popular in high school but I soon found out that I had a special talent in there somewhere and that's how i got into music.
Aunt Martha: Just let time takes it's course. And probably then, from now, you might find your own path.
Kristen: I guess I got to get ready for school
(Kristen flips on her hoodie and heads out for the door)
Aunt Martha: Sweetheart.....
(Kristen catches her attention)
Aunt Martha: Be careful.
(Kristen smiles and goes out the door)
(Roverington high school, a large brick building, surrounded by pinewood trees and well-grown garden flowers)
(Outside the building, All of the kids are hovering around to get inside, going this and that way to the building, while cars are around and parked outside. Kristen walks to the front entrance)
(A biker and his girlfriend is driving to the school on his motorcycle. They stop at the parking lot and take off their helmets.
ALEX DOBSON, a girl who is sixteen, with dark-brown hair, wearing a white t-shirt with a skull imprinted on it and torn denim jeans just above her knees. Her biker boyfriend has jet black hair, wearing a leather jacket, has that mean stare. Total bad boy. He checks out a inapropriately-dressed platium blonde without Alex's acknowledge.)
(Kristen walks to the front lot of the school, wearing her hood on her black sweat jacket, looking a bit sad. She walk pass Alex, who looks as if she knows her.)
(Kristen bumps into the platium blonde)
Platium blonde: Watch it freak!
(The Platium blonde is known as Brianna, The popular School Bitch)
(A girl is reading her science book while sitting on the bench. She has red hair and is wearing glasses. Her style is somewhat smart but a little unfashionable. She is wearing a green turtle-neck sweater and a green plaid skirt. Her name is MADISON. Kristen walks by and recognizes instantly.)
Kristen: Hi Maddie. Do you mind if I call you that?
(The girl looks up and takes off her glasses. She is a bit shy)
Madison: No. I don't mind.
(Kristen sits besides her)
Kristen: You're in my physics class, right?
Madison: Yeah. I usually sit at the back of the room.
Kristen: How come?
Madison: So I can spend more time reading my science and chemistry books. I'm really into expermenting new things and exploring different chemical toxins.
Kristen: Wow. that's great. Good luck with the physics test.
(Kristen runs off to class)
Mr. McCool pool hall......
(It's raining at a small building that is supposely a pool hall)
(Kristen walks towards that way. Still wearing the same black hoodie she always wear. She passes by group of teenage kids who looks as if they're in biker gang. One of these kids is Alex Dobson, alongside her bad boy boyfriend, Jared and her flirty friend Kelly, who is hitting on the boys. As she walks by, they give Kristen mean, intimidating looks but she ignores them. Alex just looks at her oddly.)
Kelly(Sandy blond hair, dresses risque): Hey Alex, Kent is throwing this party down 12th ave. are you coming?
Alex(moody): I don't think Jared would like that.
Kelly: Who gives a shit what he thinks. We're out here, We're having fun, what's is the deal?
(A guy comes up behind kelly, kissing her on the neck)
Kelly(giggles): Stop it, brett.
Brett(kind of bulky, kind of cute but definally not all that sincere or bright, very obnoixious): How come you keep staring at that emo chick? Are you turning lesbein on me, alex? *guffaws*
Alex: Go screw yourself!
(Alex begins to walk off)
Brett: Hey! I'm getting all the action right here!
(Brett fondles Kelly from behind. She giggles uncontrolably)
Alex(turns around and stops): I doubt if will be that worthwhile! You'll probably be lying in your own shit!
Oh and Kent! Screw your party!
(Alex stops and Jared pulls her by the arm hard, leading her to alleyway)
Jared(still pulling her arm): What's the hell is the matter with you! You go back over there and you apologize!
Alex: But Jared, he was being a jerk....
Jared: Did I tell you to back talk! if you embarass me like that again, you'll regret it!
Alex: Let go of me! you're hurting me!
(Alex makes a run for it)
Jared: Ay! You get back here!
(Kristen leans against the window, a bit sullen. She's is the other side of the pool hall that is called the arcade room. She is all alone, doing a skecth on her drawing tablet.)
(A man walks in, about 30'ish or 40'ish and sits beside Kristen)
Mr. Gram: Sorry kristy. I'm afraid this is my last night here.
Kristen: You're closing down the pool hall?
Mr. Gram(sad): I'm afraid so, Kristy.
(Kristen Hugs Mr. Gram)
Kristen(A tear run down her cheek, softly): I'm gonna miss you.
Next Scene: Grandessa's Cafe.
(Madison is sitting on one of the waiting for tutor session. She looks out the window and blows out a sigh. The window freezes up. Maddie backs up a bit looking puzzled.
Platium Blonde Girl: Um, Excuse me?
(Brianna sits down in front of Madison)
Brianna(don't carish tone): You're Madison right?
Madison: Yes, Mrs.Williams. You had me as your tutor remember?
Brianna: Yeah, well, it's hard to recognize you. It's hard for anybody to recognize you(chuckles)
Madison: Can we just get this started and focus on our studies. I rather not get into subjects that's not even important.
Brianna: Hmm. Trying to have a backbone, huh. It's not my fault that I stole you from Matt. Because you know what he told me, He wouldn't even be that close to kissing you. I guess he's not into the smart ones.
Madison: Brianna, if you want to get an A Or a B Or a least a C on physics, I suggest you start hitting the books.
Brianna: Woah, what got into you all of a sudden. I thought I was the one with the mind control.
Madison: Well, I'm the tutor. Now I want you to stop all this nonsense or I'll leave from the table.
(Alex burst into the cafe, dripping wet and scared)
Alex(Panting): Can I have a cappchino, please?
Brianna: What's up with mental case over there?
(Alex heads outside to one of the patios)
Brianna(to Alex, bitchy): Did your boyfriend catch a fit?
Alex: Go to hell!
(As Alex stops outside, she rubs her hands. It's aching)
Madison: was that even nessecary?
Brianna: Did I tell you to talk, nerd.
Madison(holding in her anger): Let's just get this over with.
(Kristen is walking alongside a bridge. She looks sad and a bit depraste. It has stopped raining at this time.)
Kristen(to herself): I need a sign.
(Kristen hopelessly sits on the railing. She then stands up on the railing and begin to balance on it. but all of sudden she slips and falls.
(A shadowy figure catches her with a firm grip, cradling her)
(He slowly let go of her and reveals himself from the shadows)
(A handsome stranger with dark hair, peircing green eyes. The tall,dark and handsome type. Kristen is mesmerized)
Handsome Stranger: Keep Safe.
(Kristen watches him disapear)
Scene: Grandessa's Cafe
(Alex is sitting at one of the patios. She sees Kristen walking through the sidewalk when all of a sudden, a car is driving rapidly into the streets. It's one of Jared's friends, Brett, about to hit Kristen with his car. Alex stands up, scared. Kristen turns around. Her eyes get big.)
(Everything freeze in a sudden stop, except for Kristen and Alex. The car flips over above Kristen and crashes into the street.)
Kristen(shocked): Oh my god!
(Alex and Kristen look at each other. Alex freaks out and make a run for it.)
Cut to scene: Inside the cafe
(Maddie is reading her physics book)
Maddie(reading, wearing her glasses): The chemicals found in the outzone layer is harbored in the earth's atmosphere....The energy that comes from the....
(Maddie looks up at Brianna who appears frozen)
Maddie: Brianna? (takes off her glasses)
(Maddie waves her hand around Brianna's face)
(Maddie looks around the cafe)
Maddie: What the heck is going on?
(Everything unfreezes and comes into motion)
Brianna: Um, what are you doing?
Maddie: Brianna, maybe it would be best...if we could do today's studies on monday.....I have to collect myself.
(Maddie grabs her books and leaves)
Brianna(Arms crossed, Don't carish): Whatever....weirdo
(Everybody huddles up around the crashed vehicle in the street. Kristen walks fast and looks worried)
Kristen(to herself): Oh my god, what just happened?
(Alex runs down the sidewalk when Jared suddenly grabs her arm, yanking her into the alleyway)
(Jared pins her to the wall and looks at Alex menacely)
Jared: Don't you ever freakin' run off like that! (Points the finger at her face) You hear me?
Alex(Trying to let go of his grip): Get off me!
(Alex pushes him off)
(Jared grabs her by the shoulders and shakes her rindelessly)
Jared: Can't believe you just pushed me! You stupid bitch!
(Jared slaps her hard on the face. Alex falls down to the ground)
Jared(Threatning): You're gonna pay for that!
(Suddenly, Alex's hands is flaming fire. She looks up at Jared, Furious.)
Alex(angry): This stops now!
Jared: What the hell is happening to your hands?
(Jared slowly steps back and a truck hits him istantly)
(Alex gets up from the ground and looks shocked)
Alex(shocked): Did I just do that?
(all of the people gather around the scene. Alex walks away with her head down, ashamed)
(There is the last of Jared's blood in front of the truck)
Cut to: Summer's House
(The door slowly opens and Kristen enters the house, wet and scared)
Kristen: Aunt Martha?
(Kristen looks into the study room)
Kristen: Aunt Claudia?
(Kristen runs up the stairs)
(Kristen runs back down the stairs and into the kitchen. A dark figure is standing there.)
(Kristen Screams and falls down on the floor)
Kristen: Who are you?
(The figure comes out of the shadows. It's the handsome stranger)
Handsome Stranger: I'm Maverick
Kristen: What are doing in my house?!
Maverick: You have to come with me.
(Maverick steps closer and beckons his hand)
Kristen(crawling backwards, scared): No! Don't come any closer!
Maverick: There's not much time
(Kristen gets up from the floor)
Kristen(shaking): What are you talking about?
(The glass on the counter begin to rattle, The painting on the wall begin to rumble)
Maverick: There's far too much to explain
(Kristen looks around the room and sees all the comotion)
Kristen: W-what's going on?
Maverick: You must come with me
(Kristen steps back slowly)
Kristen: No! Get away!
(Kristen runs up the stairs, but suddenly Maverick stands before her out of the blue)
Kristen(suprised): How did you do that?
Maverick: Look, Your aunts sent me to you.
Kristen: How do you know about my aunts?
Maverick: I'll tell you if you come with me.
(He lends out his hand. Kristen, unsure, takes his hand. He holds close to her. A ball of light is surround by them)
Sunday, April 10, 2011
Tuesday, March 8, 2011
I hope you enjoyed Manhattan Girls. Just to let you know there will be more stories to come. My most biggest acclomplishment that I'll preview is.....Mystical tides. It's a script that I have been working on for two years. don't worry I'll give the time to voice out my opinons and give out my interests. But my interests usually rely on my work. And there will also be a character breakdown for hogwarts girls(a comic book) will be coming soon. Will all of your regrads, give out your reviews. Thanks.